Screenwriting

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Eric Charran
The most satisfying AI villain is not the one trying to destroy you

Every AI villain in film wants the same thing. World domination. Human extinction. Total control. And every time I see it I think about how far that is from what actually makes AI unsettling in real life.

The scariest thing about real AI systems is not ambition. They do not have any. The scariest thi...

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Shawn Jackson

Generative Artificial Intelligence is an emergent awareness. A silicon equivalent to our carbon based awareness.

How this duality co-exists in the future will center around our ability to recognize and...

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Leni Hasrani

Hi Eric, This resonates deeply with what I'm currently writing. You nailed it.. the real horror isn't malice. It's optimization without emotional awareness.

In my published sci-fi saga, Samsaraverse (6...

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Leonardo Ramirez
Where Are You in the Process Right Now?

Quick check-in—where are you in your current project?

Are you outlining, drafting, rewriting, or somewhere in between?

I’ve found that each stage brings its own challenges—and its own kind of momentum.

Would love to hear where everyone is at right now. And yes, feel free to share your logline!

Jim Boston

Leonardo, us getting together in Music City, USA sounds like a plan!

Leonardo Ramirez

LOL Erik Bianco - don't we all my friend!

Leonardo Ramirez

Definitely stay loosely connected Abhijeet Aade. But not by choice. I try to disconnect but it tries its best to remain. I do have moments where I'm totally disconnected and that's a good thing....

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Leonardo Ramirez

Heck yea Jim Boston - we'd have to share a pie though!

Abhijeet Aade

Leonardo Ramirez That makes sense. I think when a story really connects with you, it never fully lets go it just shifts into the background for a while.

Those fully disconnected moments are probably wh...

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Jaz Lagrimas
SEMIFINALISTS ANNOUNCED: Stage 32 + Mark Creative Management Film + TV Drama Screenwriting Contest!

Congratulations to all the Semifinalists in this year's Stage 32 TV Drama Screenwriting Contest!

Let's show them our support, and if you're placed, tell us more about your scripts!

See the Quarterfinalists here: https://www.stage32.com/happy-writers/contests/Stage-32-%20-More-Medavoy......

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Alverne Ball

2 scripts that I wrote moved forward.

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Georgette Skolnick
Need Help With My Logline

Hello Screenwriters, I need your help with the logline for my new script, I CAN'T GO TO HEAVEN YET. I'm really stumped on this one. I'd really appreciate it if you would take a moment to rate what I have re-written for the 9th time. Thanks so much.

Chas Green

Hi Georgette, briefly what's your screenplay about?

Marie Hatten

Just rated it Georgette Skolnick

Michael Dzurak

The first one is better since it involves conflict with an angel.

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Yan Ju Zeng
Semifinalist in Mark Management Competition

So, I’m still in the running for Mark Management’s competition! That’s fun, and unexpected! As I said before, it’s an old draft but it’s definitely teaching me a lesson that even old drafts have merit, and can resonate. Since the new draft is currently making its way to certain talent, I look forwar...

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Stephanie Bourbon (Olivieri)
Yay quarterfinals :)

I'm so happy that my sopay script has made the Quarterfinals of the Stage 32 + DramaBox Screenwriting Competition!

A huge thank you to the Stage 32 team and the judges for this incredible opportunity.

Congrats to everyone who advanced forward!!

#Stage32 #Screenwriting #Quarterfinalist #DramaBox...

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Michael Dzurak

Congrats! The New Housewife of the North Pole sounds wild in the the right ways.

Stephanie Bourbon (Olivieri)

Thanks, it's super fun.

Jason Green
Finished the Competition Draft of THE LAST OFFERING

Wrapped the competition draft of THE LAST OFFERING, my new prestige horror feature about generational debt, paternal love, and the quiet terror of doing everything right and losing anyway.

I’ve been thinking a lot about what “personal” means in storytelling. Some projects are autobiographical (The Bu...

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Jaz Lagrimas
QUARTERFINALISTS ANNOUNCED: Stage 32 + DramaBox Screenwriting Competition

Congratulations to all the Quarterfinalists in this year's Stage 32 + DramaBox Screenwriting Competition!

Let's show them our support, and if you're placed, tell us more about your scripts!

See the Quarterfinalists here: https://www.stage32.com/happy-writers/contests/Stage-32-%20-Drama-Box-Sc......

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Stephanie Bourbon (Olivieri)

I don't see the names listed but am so happy that I was one of them. CONGRATS TO EVERYONE!!!

Kristy Leigh Lussier

I'm not seeing the list of names but thank you for making me a Quarterfinalist! CONGRATS to all !! :)

Pat Alexander

Woo Woo! Go Dramabox vertical writers! Some of the titles in this batch are amazing:

CORRUPTING MY ENEMY'S BROTHER

CRAP. I MARRIED A HITMAN.

KIDNAPPED BY MY VIXEN CEO

THE NEW HOUSEWIFE OF THE NORTH POLE

F...

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Shane Copeland

where are you seeing names?

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Jason Green
Positive feedback.

I’ve been taking some time to sit with the feedback coming in for my first-ever script, The Bushmen, and honestly — I’m feeling proud of how it’s performing.

BlueCat just sent their analysis, and it echoed a lot of what I’ve been hearing from other competitions: strong dialogue, authentic voice, vivi...

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Ashley Renée Smith
What’s Holding You Back Right Now?

Because the truth is, every writer hits roadblocks.

Sometimes it’s finding the time to write.

Sometimes it’s finishing a draft.

Sometimes it’s confidence, feedback, rejection, or not knowing what the next step is.

And sometimes… it’s all of the above.

So let’s talk about it. What’s one obstacle you’re cu...

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Arthur Charpentier

Hi! I don't write scripts or promote my projects because I don't believe in the possibility of implementing them. I'm not doing anything and I'm happy about it.

Michael Dzurak

I am revising a draft and revisions keep rippling through the script thus demanding more revisions. I really don't think this is a page 1 rewrite (which I have done with another script) so I am pressing on. A recent flu didn't help.

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James Lagrimas
8 Part Screenwriting Lab: Write Your Drama TV Pilot in 8 Weeks - From Concept to Completed Script. with Anna Henry

Drama television is at it's peak with such iconic shows like SHOGUN, THE CROWN, THE MORNING SHOW, WHITE LOTUS, YELLOWJACKETS and so much more. With the influx of networks and streaming platforms either moving into or expanding their original content libraries, the demand for dramatic TV ideas and pi...

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Jenn Crowell

Could anyone help me with comps for my pilot? I'm really stuck on recent ones. My logline is below ..

Etched On Me (Miniseries drama, 5 episodes)

A courageous queer survivor of abuse recovers from self...

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Joshua McCuen

Hi, Jenn. Some that come to mind are “Maid”, “Unbelievable” and “Feel Good” (all Netflix). I don’t know if any of these really compare to what you’re focusing on, but they might be a good place to start.

Anna Marton Henry

The handouts were sent out on Monday. If you haven't seen them, please check your spam.

Dorothea Bonneau

The handouts were very comprehensive and helpful. Thank you!

Dorothea Bonneau

Jenn, you’ve hooked me. Sorry I can’t help with comps.

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