Authoring & Playwriting

I love the wise, true, & tried advice! Thank you for your insight. It does seem to offend someone somewhere every time I write anything. Never my intention. Maybe they are people who want to be noticed most. LOL Fran Tabor "If the offended relative cries fowl, just reassure the person, "You're much too wise to be THAT character." If he's truly egotistical, he'll believe you."

I take pieces from various people I know, have met, or inspired by-- it's a fine line between replicating them and using certain things as inspiration. You're right- it's not worth hurting someone, but I'm also the person who in my writing-- loves honouring them too. --so It's a real balancing act. Morgan Hawke, an author who I have loved- did a course and wrote a book on how to adapt those people into characters so you can use their "Baseline" over and over. It's been my go to standard ever since I took the course. It's made a huge difference in how I portray those people. Even if I don't know them.

Oh Debbie Seagle I would like to offer you some advice that I apply to my personal life. I hope that it will help you not to worry so much about what other people think and brush it off. Don't let some insecure person's opinions handcuff your writing, In the age of social media, it seems everyone gets offended at everything. Like people are just looking for ways to be offended. Here is the thing, you cannot offend anyone. "Offense is taken, not given." A person for whatever their deep unmet emotional need is, has CHOSEN to take offense at your words. That is on them. You're probably right, that person just wants attention. Some people thrive on negative attention. If you don't respond, they get no emotional reward. The second one that I have come to experience in recent years, for some reason people love to tell me I'm rude! Well, rude is a perception. This is what I say to them, and you could certainly apply it to your offended relatives. "I am responsible for what I say, but I am not responsible for how you perceive what I say." Life is so much easier when you don't take responsibility for other people's problems. HAHA

Thank you Suzanne Bronson - I love your confidence. "Offense is taken, not given." - a great way to look at it, and I'll not let it dilute my creativity.

Cynna Ael what a great way to look at a character - honoring them!

I’ve a master in philosophy so here is my advice.

What we do in philosophy is to go at the very root of what we know and question it. For exemple, time. We are used to linear time with causes and consequences. What happens in the past gives the presents conditions which inform us what will happen next. So you question that: what if time wasn’t linear. What if everything that happen in the past and future is determining to understand how something react or behave (like in quantum ohysics). You build on This new premise

Another examole would be our individualist self. We all focused on living and the self because we die and act individually. But what if that specie died collectively (perhaps two or three indivuals would be linked and would die together). Or what if their action was always collective in nature.

You can also go to our root values (freedom, love…) and change them. imagine a specie with other core values.

So the basic advice is go to the root and change it. then build it back up with these new conditions. What do you get

Thank you for your suggestions. I hope you succeed in writing your project Michael Dzurak

Thank you, that’s truly helpful. I’ll think about those questions Nicolas Lavoie

I see my last answer was perhaps misguided as it was more about the nature of “original thought”.

if it’s about devising an advanced culture - the first thing I think of is habitat.

advanced cultures build settlements and those settlements are typically indicative of the culture that built it. If you can build a city what does it look like? is it a collective space like a hive or is there space for individuality? what adorns the walls- writing? art? can they write? do they need to communicate in such a way? what does the foundations of the city look like? do they even require foundations or is this world not bound by our understandings of gravity ? if so how does that effect movement around a city?

discover the city discover the civilisation

thank you those are truly helpful questions to build a civilization Ian Buchanan

David Taylor I get what you mean — those small daily irritations really do bring something genuine to a relationship.

For me, tension often comes from something a bit deeper: the way people are, their temperament, how they move through life.

It’s simply another way of keeping things human, I think.

Personally, I think emotional depth and worldbuilding in sci-fi are two important aspects in the said genre but the former is the engine that drives the story forward.

In all movies, your emotional depth enables your audience to relate to your onscreen characters. Blissful or sad emotions our characters experience as the movies unfolds should resonate with our audience's experiential learning.

Any writer who glorifies worldbuilding at the expense of emotional depth is definitely skating on quicksand.

WH?

Answer: Human beings are social animals that have emotions. Emotional attachment is key. Conversely, worldbuilding , as far as I'm concerned, is largely drawn from reasoning or logic but its end product is steeped in emotional depth. While creating this unique world , you're tactfully appealing to the emotions of your audiences. In a way , I subscribe to the idea that the screenwriter should build their world ( with its own rules ---- dos and don'ts) largely from the emotional depth they intend to.create.

Worldbuilding should enhance the thematic flow of the writer's storyline. Worldbuilding, if expertly handled, has an astounding capacity to shape character dialogue. Dialogue should in turn explore the flowing:

1. What's at stake

2. The fears of characters

3. Expectations

4. Themes

5. Motifs

6. Etc

In short, the better approach between the two is the EMOTIONAL DEPTH TO WORLDBUILDING APPROACH and not the other way round.

Jabulani Pongolani Thanks, Jabulani — that idea really resonates with me.

I often start from a simple question: what does the system expect from people, and how do those expectations quietly shape the way they see themselves?

That kind of soft, well-intentioned pressure can become its own form of constraint.

And when a character finally wants something the system doesn’t consider “useful,” that tension naturally creates emotion — almost like a small rebellion just to feel something real again.

For me, that’s exactly where worldbuilding and emotional depth meet: the mechanics of the world explain why the characters feel the way they do.

In a novel use thoughts, feelings & POV of protagonist & antagonist. Or jump into each of the characters minds in turn. Re scripts, obviously show, don’t tell with visual action/subtext. Add “Universal” human moments EG love, hate, coming of age. Or nuggets of life we can all identify with, eg funny, bizarre, sad, embarrassing. Protagonist has their own inner battle, aswell as the outer conflict with monsters/machines/galaxies etc. Switch camps, so we see through the eyes of aliens too. Many pages of a novel, when adapted to a script, may only be a crisp one liner. Make succinct dialogue count. The new world has its own set of rules. Familiar themes or pre sold concepts such as aliens, outer space etc work well with a unique twist, something we’ve not seen before, more than “same old.” Sci Fi can easily be tailored to a four quadrant age range, depending on the adult content, so consider your target audience.

Debbie Croysdale Thanks so much for your insight, Debbie — I really appreciate the depth of your perspective.

What you said about shifting between inner conflict and larger external forces really speaks to what I’m trying to achieve. I love the idea that the emotional core doesn’t disappear in a high-concept world; it just resonates differently depending on whose eyes we’re looking through.

For me, the key is to let the world’s rules intensify the characters’ private struggles rather than drown them out. When the environment amplifies a character’s fears, desires, or blind spots, even a small emotional moment can feel huge — almost like it carries the weight of the entire system on its shoulders.

That balance between the intimate and the structural is exactly what makes sci-fi so powerful to write.

Thanks again for sharing your approach — it’s genuinely inspiring.

I Posted for a co righter . with about 3 years to live I was told go to school then come on Knowing Il be dead by then this dream is the only thing that keeps me going . maybe it is time to give up and say good night all !

It's not time, Jay A Swendris. I don't know what your doctors have said or why but it's not always about making it. It's about living in the dream in the now by pouring out your stories. No matter how much time you think you have, pour your stories out. They don't have to be perfect. They just have to be poured out onto paper.

Hi, Mikka Hope. I’m a Stage 32 Lounge Moderator. I wanted to let you know I moved your post from the Composing Lounge to the Authoring & Playwriting Lounge since it's about writing a series of books. Let me know if you have any questions.

I read some of what you wrote. You have talent. I can't work on your conversion into a screenplay right now due to personal issues.

Sorry, I'm lost just reading your post, can't imagine any further.

I suspect everyone's gonna want to improve on my work, the loudest being the ones who ignore my offerings. I'd almost rather get a "This sucks" to let me know they're paying attention.

Now the positive feedback is the vast majority of spoken feedback and I have a whole document of these comments which I've already sent to the ignorers (who still keep on ignoring) so therefore nothing that comes my way is unsuspected, although the request for a pilot and synopsis was the first of its kind but still not unsuspected nor unexpected because I've put in the work and have learned long ago that democracy and freedom comes with the price of ignorance, the wish and willingness to not seek out truth or dialogue with others. It's their right to be scroogelike hermits. The Constitution allows it.

Meriem that's both hilarious and chilling at the same time. Whether it's true or not depends on the imagination of the producer. Are they a Ron Howard (Avatar, Avatar Brave New World--I forgot the name of the sequel) or do they have a binary, linear imagination (the same thing that scares so many cisgenders when gender dissolution enters their world). But at the same time, if you're going to imagine a parallel or skewed universe that's very unlike our own, your imagination needs to still be able to create something coherent enough for viewers to get and the production team to make real. I don't think they'll ever make a movie from Finnegan's Wake for that reason but it's a great book if you can get through Joyce's impossible to follow prose.

Thank you very much Marc Ginsburg

The De-Evolution Game was originally inspired by Mr. Nobody, and since my story also deals with parallel universes, I tried using a similar structure. I noticed how the psychologist in the film guides the narrative—each new question creates a new branch of Nemo’s reality. But that structure didn’t work for my story.

I need to invent another way to present the parallel universes while keeping the whole narrative coherent.

Here are some insights from the story. I’d like to know your point of view.

https://www.stage32.com/lounge/promotion/The-De-Evolution-Game-Paradoxes...

Sounds like you had an illustrator think deeply about your message, especially since you approved of the suggestion. My unexpected feedback came from an editor who suggested a different head for my sci fi books. He was right.

If I ever get unexpected feedback, I'll let you know.

Thanks for breaking down the different roles and how to work together, Lauren Hackney!

Thanks Maurice Vaughan :)

You're welcome, Lauren Hackney. This info will come in handy if I write books.

An excellent breakdown Lauren - in practice 2 and 3 often elide.

Especially important: proofreading is the FINAL stage.

Too often writers send a document to be proofread, then make changes and don't keep a record of what they've altered, meaning the whole piece has to be proofread over gain.

My condolences, Cynna Ael. I get burned out. I'm trying to get better at avoiding it. I'll check out "The Artist's Way." Thanks for the book rec!

Thanks. This month- I've been a published author for 22 years and I realised-- I've switched mediums- even though I do still write novels and stories-- that I don't want to burn out in scriptwriting. I want to keep these ideas I've got flowing. I realised others might also get this way during this time of the year. Wanted to give some help that worked for me. Not everything works for everyone, but a lot of people have found help in the book itself-- picking and choosing items. It's what I did and it really helped at a time when I honestly thought I'd never write again.

You're welcome, Cynna Ael. Congratulations on being a published author for 22 years! I make really detailed outline for my scripts, so I don't usually have a problem keeping ideas flowing. And doing the Tuesday writing exercises that Ashley Smith posts in Stage 32's Writers' Room helps too.

yes that's a good theme as well Maurice Vaughan

the persistence of memory

I’ve written 6 stories thinking they were about other things but in the end realised they could all go into a collection by that title

That sounds so good James LO

Even when a story explores many themes at once, there is always one major guiding theme behind it.

meriem, have you written any short story or screenplay about times travel or parallel worlds from the lens of human existence that you would care to share? I’d be happy to swap with one of my unpublished tales revolving around the persistence of memory

I have the idea but it’s not written yet.

It’s called The De-Evolution Game: Paradoxes Unleashed.

You can see some insights about it here James LO

https://stage32.com/post/3920679695024137577

Lauren Hackney, this is such a helpful breakdown. Thank you for laying it out so clearly!

Lauren Hackney I really did! Low key and relaxing. How was yours?

Yikes, even titles? Lol thanks for this post Lauren Hackney, I’ll definitely have to read the hell out a contract and find a good lawyer if I ever release my novels and comics :p

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh I hope for you it's a case of 'when you release' not 'if you release' - you got some good stories going on - they need to be shared with the world!

Thank you Lauren Hackney, it's going to take a while with the way I'm going ^^; but I'll do my best~