Supporting Video for My Screenplay Pitch – Feedback Welcome
Hi all,
This video is based on the opening scene of my screenplay PLANET SHE and also includes a brief description of the first part of the story at the end of the video. It's a motion-comic-style presentation using still images with audio to capture the atmosphere and tone I envision for the beginning of the film. The production quality is modest because all of the images and other materials were sourced from free online resources and AI tools. My goal wasn't to create a polished proof of concept, but rather to communicate the mood and cinematic feel of the opening.
Do you think including a video like this as part of a screenplay pitch package could strengthen the pitch, or could it actually hurt my chances by making the project seem less professional?
If the feedback is positive, I'd consider using it as part of my pitch package for this project.