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A faithless Sheriff struggles to keep the small town he protects from turning against him as he races to stop an insidious murderer before he, or it, kills again.
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Forsaken is a supernatural thriller set in the rural Missouri Ozarks circa 1945, where a faithless sheriff pursues an elusive child-killer, hidden amongst the residents of their small town. Relying on evidence and facts in a community beholden to fears of the unknown, the sheriff must choose between vengeance or justice as his beliefs are tested, and the true killer is revealed as an unlikely member of the God-fearing community - possessed by the demon "Legion."
The story explores themes of morality, integrity and faith, asking if one actually defines the others.
Final Draft: Big Break Competition - Finalist 2024
Page International Screenwriting Awards - Quarter Finalist 2025
Austin Film Festival Script Competition - Second Rounder 2025
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AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!
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An entirely intriguing story, well done Tye Nelson , would definitely watch!
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I remember we did a script breakdown of this on the Monday. You have a lot of things you showed us in the story as it was looked at. There were a lot of elements that challenged 'faith' in the story.
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