Not sure if this is the lounge to post this in but I was wondering if anybody would be interested in giving me feedback on my pitch deck for a sports/drama feature film: Nevaeh.
Thanks in advance.
https://michaelbeezy.wordpress.com/2026/08/12/nevaeh-movie-pitchdeck/
Hello Michael Bryan, consider choosing between a story overview and a synopsis rather than including both. Make sure your main characters have descriptions that explain who they are and their relevance to the story and the main character. Try replacing your inspiration slide with your comparable slide near your logline slide for better flow. Also, consider incorporating theme into your director's vision slide instead of treating it separately. I'm also open to helping if you need the service done. Hope this helps!
Thank you for the feedback!