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When a vulnerable single mom marries a small town paediatrician, she discovers a ring of vampires preying on children in the paediatric unit – including her hemophiliac daughter. THE LOST BOYS meets THE STEPFATHER.
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BLOOD DRIVE is a unique concept, Phoenix Black. I like the twist on the Vampire sub-genre. The logline is just the setup. I suggest adding the story goal (maybe she tries to take down the ring of vampires, protects her daughter and the other children from the vampires, etc.).
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