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A washed-up comic with a forgotten past recruits a retired pop star and a former youth counselor to protect a teen whose music is triggering dangerous psychological episodes — only to discover the phenomenon is spreading across Canada. Together, they must track and help others before it’s too late.
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Unknown forces are awakening hidden abilities in people across the country — often triggered by strong emotional states or sound-based stimuli. Most dismiss it as mental illness. But something deeper, more dangerous is stirring.
Those affected are vulnerable — and increasingly unstable. A mysterious benefactor enlists LP and his unlikely team to investigate, contain, and protect these “awakened” before the world notices... or worse, exploits them.
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Intriguing.
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Interesting, but can be tightened - lose "forgotten past" - whats the result of the psychological episodes? (stakes)
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Tye I might have to wait for the rewrites but the forgotten past is going to help give some depth in the series to relate to these protagonist. But I can try to see how it should come across to make it needed. It is not easy to say this is part of the story or my style in this writing. But noted.
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Marcos Fizzotti Thank you for reading my script.
Abdusamad Shafiev Thank you also for reading a few of these loglines.
Thank you Michael Dzurak. Let me know if there was anything not clear or didn't work for you.