When a bionic starship pilot discovers her long lost parents are alive, she must accept her bond with an alien species before embarking on a dangerous quest to find them.
Ingrid Wren, this logline presents an exciting sci-fi premise with strong emotional stakes and an intriguing character arc. The idea of a bionic pilot discovering her long-lost parents are alive and needing to embrace a bond with an alien species offers a fresh take with potential for both action and depth. However, the phrasing could be tightened for clarity and punch. Consider specifying the nature of the bond with the alien species: is it physical, mental, emotional, or cultural? What makes it challenging for her to accept? Adding a clearer sense of the conflict or antagonist on this “dangerous quest” would also raise the tension. Overall, it’s imaginative and compelling!
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Ingrid Wren, this logline presents an exciting sci-fi premise with strong emotional stakes and an intriguing character arc. The idea of a bionic pilot discovering her long-lost parents are alive and needing to embrace a bond with an alien species offers a fresh take with potential for both action and depth. However, the phrasing could be tightened for clarity and punch. Consider specifying the nature of the bond with the alien species: is it physical, mental, emotional, or cultural? What makes it challenging for her to accept? Adding a clearer sense of the conflict or antagonist on this “dangerous quest” would also raise the tension. Overall, it’s imaginative and compelling!
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