Hi. Michelle Kabatoff. Interesting concept. This reminds me of "Date Night."

How about this for the logline: "After a simple suitcase mix-up throws an ordinary couple into a dangerous and comical day of organized crime, they ______________ (their goal) so _________ (stakes)."

Thanks Maurice Vaughan I always appreciate feedback! Loglines are a tough cookie I am determined to crack. It is absolutely comparable to date night, but lower budget ;) I work the mow circuit as art department crew, so I often find myself sprouting ideas that fits that world.

You're welcome, Michelle Kabatoff. Sounds like a fun project.