Sounds juicy

Tony S. 1 star? Really? That's not cool. You're not giving Noel a fair shake or a chance to correct whatever (you feel) needs correcting.

Noel, first off. I love the poster! I think you have a good baseline concept, short and to the point, but I can't rate this logline fairly simply because there's no meat on it. Don't hesitate to be a little more descriptive.

Take Identity for example: (Stranded at a desolate Nevada motel during a nasty rainstorm, ten strangers become acquainted with each other when they realize that they're being killed off one by one.)

Or Vacancy: (A married couple becomes stranded at an isolated motel and finds hidden video cameras in their room. They soon realize that unless they escape, they'll be the next victims of a snuff film.)

Thanks for the honest feedback Tony S. obviously you weren't feeling it. I agree with you and Frank Baruch it's kind of bland. Feel free to make any suggestions. I have like three different versions but none of them are perfect. And thanks Billy, we all know how hard loglines are.

New and improved logline! Thanks to Tony S. and @Frank for pushing me to do better. This is what this site is all about!

Noel, this logline feels like such a great throwback to me and man, I love it so much.

Noel Thompson You're welcome! This one is so much better than what you originally had. Good work!