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CHANCE MOON RISING
By Terri L. Bea

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE: Chance Moon Rising is a Family Christian Drama about how a selfish young woman’s modern day success is snatched away after a tragic car accident.  The accident leaves her physical body lying in a coma during the present time, but her spiritual body fights for her life in the darkest time in African American History as a 18th Century slave.

CHANCE MOON RISING

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Ariana Fiorello-Omotosho

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Ariana Fiorello-Omotosho

This logline has a powerful concept with emotional and spiritual depth, blending contemporary struggle with historical trauma in a unique way. The idea of a modern woman’s soul navigating 18th-century enslavement is compelling and could offer a profound exploration of identity, redemption, and faith. However, the logline could be tightened for clarity and impact. Consider simplifying the phrasing and clarifying the protagonist’s goal or stakes in both timelines. For example, what must she learn or overcome in the past to survive in the present? Strengthening the protagonist’s arc and refining the wording will help the core message resonate more clearly.

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