Thank you for your comments on my logline. I really appreciate them, but I would prefer it if you could be more specific about what you expected and what was missing.

Onwukwe Abraham Ogonna, your logline is charming, adventurous, and clearly aimed at an animated audience, which is great. The pairing of a brave kangaroo rat and a wise old professor sets up a classic hero-mentor dynamic, and the stakes are clear and urgent. The phrase “the only home they’ve ever known” adds heart and emotional resonance. To make it even stronger, consider hinting at the tone or style: is it whimsical, epic, comedic? Also, giving the professor a species or unique trait could enhance the visual world and sense of character.

Ashley Renee Smith I Ashley Renee Smith I really want to thank you for your message. I will definitely attend to those things you pointed out to address. I’m so grateful ❤️