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AIR ZOMBIE
By Jon Stout
What happens when a zombie outbreak occurs while you're on a five hour flight from Honolulu to LAX? As the fellow passengers and crew turn ravenous, a dwindling group of scrappy passengers battle for their lives and make tough decisions in an attempt to survive until the plane lands.
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Hey Jon, have you completed this screenplay? Screenwriter here --- and would love to collaborate on this fascinating story with you. Feel free to message
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Jon Stout, this is a fun, high-concept survival thriller with a great built-in ticking clock. Your logline does a solid job setting up the situation and tone, though it could be tightened slightly for impact. For example, consider trimming “what happens when…” and jumping straight into the setup: “A zombie outbreak erupts on a five-hour flight from Honolulu to LAX…” That approach sharpens the hook and gets us right into the action. Overall, this sounds like a wild ride.