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RUSH

RUSH
By Kelly Krause

GENRE: Drama, Western
LOGLINE:

Six disparate women unite against a wealthy speculator using intimidation and violence to remove them from their properties in Gold Rush California.


Pamela

Six women unite against a ploy to remove them from their mineral-rich property through systematic violence.

Tony S.

In Gold Rush California, six women unite to battle a greedy speculator who uses violence in an attempt to drive them off their off mineral-rich land.

Pamela

I like "drive them off". Nice, Tony.

Mark Heartford

California gold rush, six women unite and fight for their right as Greedy Shark of male speculator uses violence to force them off their properties

I went for a greedy male shark as I assume it is male vs female

Pamela

Six women unite to battle a greedy speculator who devises a ploy to drive them off their off mineral-rich land.

Pamela

Question: Why does "Gold Rush California" need to be part of the logline? Why not put that as a title? I'm just brainstorming here... hoping that all responses inspire the logline construction. I LOVE a good Western! And, I would pay money to see this one. =) The Cover: Six gun-toting women in ruffled prairie skirts—now, that's sexy!

Aray Brown

Rated this logline

Ginny Monroe MA

Hi Kelly, I love your logline for RUSH. Very good luck with your RUSH project. Ginny

Michael Sugrue

Sounds like a great project! How about 'In Gold Rush-era California, six gun-slinging women unite to defend their claim against a violent and well-heeled speculator.'

Nathaniel Baker

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