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An orphaned teen discovers a supernatural trolley that heals emotional wounds, but faces opposition from those who fear its power.
SYNOPSIS:
Old Ways
Nick is lost, grieving, and uncertain about his future. He lacks a connection to his Hawaiian heritage and struggles with belonging. The trolley represents a journey he doesn’t yet understand.
Act 1
Opening: Ray drives Nick to his first day of college, where he meets Lani and her drug-dealing brother, Kimo.
Ray, intrigued by a tourist trolley, finds an abandoned one in a junkyard.
Nick and Lani bond over a surf day, but their joy is short-lived when they discover the broken-down trolley in Ray’s driveway.
Inciting Incident:
Ray recruits Nick to help refurbish the trolley. Neighbors rally around the project.
During the blessing ceremony, the trolley unexpectedly comes to life with supernatural energy by Nick and is witnessed in secret by Kimo. The trolley's spirit is that of the last Queen of Hawai'i and reveals Nick's heritage and connection to her.
Turning Point: The trolley’s maiden voyage transforms unhappy orphans, radiating a supernatural phenomenon while orphan girl Malia bonds with Nick.
Nick sees the magic in action but remains unsure of his future with the trolley and Lani.
Another ride for PTSD veterans confirms its power, deepening the mystery.
Nick’s Transformation in Act 1: He moves from passive to engaged, curious about the trolley and its potential. His emotional barriers begin to lower. The Queen's spirit gives him the courage to inform his uncle about the magic trolley.
Act 2
New Plan: Nick and Lani secretly embrace the trolley’s magic, deciding to use it to help others.
They take more people on rides, spreading joy and transformation.
Meanwhile, Kimo grows jealous and begins plotting against them.
Plan in Action: The trolley gains viral fame, drawing media attention.
City authorities impound it, and Nick is arrested for operating an unlicensed, potentially hazardous vehicle.
Ray and Jasmine reveal their painful pasts, strengthening Nick’s connection to them.
Kimo intensifies his sabotage, vowing to tear Nick down.
Midpoint Turning Point: Nick’s first court appearance—he becomes a symbol of defiance against bureaucratic oppression.
His trial draws major media attention, splitting public opinion.
Kimo, desperate to reclaim control, plots the trolley’s destruction.
Nick’s Transformation in Act 2: He shifts from unsure to determined, embracing his role as the trolley’s guardian and a force for change in the community.
Act 3
Rethink Everything: Kimo threatens Lani and violently confronts Nick.
Authorities push for the trolley’s permanent destruction.
Nick is at his lowest point, questioning whether the fight is worth it.
That night, Kimo burns the trolley.
New Plan:
Nick sneaks into the impound lot to mourn the trolley’s loss.
Kupuna Kaimana appears, blessing the trolley again—miraculously restoring it.
Nick realizes the trolley isn’t just magical—it represents the soul of his heritage, his family, and his future.
With renewed purpose, he heads to court to prove its power.
Turning Point (Huge Failure/Major Shift):
The judge, jury, and Ray’s neighbors ride the trolley, experiencing the magic firsthand.
The judge dismisses the case, allowing Nick to continue—but only if he legally registers the trolley.
The entire community now stands behind him, and a parade celebrates his victory.
Nick’s Transformation in Act 3: He moves from hopeful to fully committed, no longer fighting just for the trolley, but for his identity and legacy.
Act 4
Climax/Ultimate Expression of the Conflict:
Kimo, enraged by Nick’s victory, leads his gang in a violent attack on the trolley.
A high-speed chase ensues, ending in Kimo’s crash and arrest.
The trolley miraculously pops back into shape, reaffirming its resilience and Nick’s destiny.
Resolution:
Months later, Nick and Lani drive the trolley over the Pali Highway, now together in a fully legal business.
At Waikiki Beach, Ray and Jasmine are married, officially adopting Malia.
Nick, Lani, and Malia celebrate by swimming in the ocean at sunset.
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