THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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TRIGGER
By Ray Crites
After surviving a brutal roadside ambush in Afghanistan, a battle-scarred soldier returns home -- only to face his real enemies: PTSD, a broken VA system, and the guilt of his best friend’s suicide. As his grip on reality unravels, one desperate act threatens to destroy the only thing he has left... himself.
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This is going to be an impactful film, Ray Crites! It deals with really important topics! The only suggestion I have for your logline is tell what the desperate act is.
Good longline. I was looking for more of a bit.
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