When her husband's psychological abuse becomes physical a young woman struggles to navigate the emotional confusion and to accept the guidance of a female spirit, in order to see what's happening before it's too late.
Marie Hatten I truly love this theme and title, I think I would love this script, especially as an actress, I think the logline is almost there...almost almost...needs a bit of something...in the navigating bit, or in the end, what does she find, within or outside of herself maybe.
Wow that really resonates with me @Juliana tbh I thinks that’s one of the weak points in the script ( the ending for Emilia). Loglines are so hard , I’ll need to tweak it a little .
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Hey Jay Gladwell thanks so much, can probably go another sentence at least.
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Thanks Marcos Fizzotti for reading and rating my logline. It's my first real attempt at it.
Thanks Tasha Lewis 2 for reading my logline.
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Thanks Neftali Rivera
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No problem and wishing you all the best with the project.
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I appreciate that, thanks Grant “Wiggy” Wiggins .
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Wow thanks Sijun Cui
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Thank you Mick
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Thanks so much A.J
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Marie Hatten I truly love this theme and title, I think I would love this script, especially as an actress, I think the logline is almost there...almost almost...needs a bit of something...in the navigating bit, or in the end, what does she find, within or outside of herself maybe.
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Wow that really resonates with me @Juliana tbh I thinks that’s one of the weak points in the script ( the ending for Emilia). Loglines are so hard , I’ll need to tweak it a little .
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Wow thanks Rick Dumont
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Physical violence scares me, I hope your young woman is doing well, I really liked the logline.
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Thanks so much @Koby Nguyen
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Thanks @Anthony