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POWER AND CONTROL
By Marie Hatten

GENRE: Other
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When her husband's psychological abuse becomes physical a young woman struggles to navigate the emotional confusion and to accept the guidance of a female spirit, in order to see what's happening before it's too late.       

Marcos Fizzotti

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Tasha Lewis 2

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Marie Hatten

Hey Jay Gladwell thanks so much, can probably go another sentence at least.

Marie Hatten

Thanks Marcos Fizzotti for reading and rating my logline. It's my first real attempt at it.

Marie Hatten

Thanks Tasha Lewis 2 for reading my logline.

Neftali Rivera

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Michael Dzurak

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John Snell

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Marie Hatten

Thanks very much John Snell

John Milton Branton

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Beridze Kakha

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Grant “Wiggy” Wiggins

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Marie Hatten
Marie Hatten

Thanks Beridze Kakha

Grant “Wiggy” Wiggins

No problem and wishing you all the best with the project.

Marie Hatten

I appreciate that, thanks Grant “Wiggy” Wiggins .

Sijun Cui

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Marie Hatten

Wow thanks Sijun Cui

Mick Eggins

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Marie Hatten

Thank you Mick

A.J .Abd El-Rahman El-Janainy

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Marie Hatten

Thanks so much A.J

Marina Albert

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Marie Hatten

Thank you Marina Albert

Juliana Philippi

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Juliana Philippi

Marie Hatten I truly love this theme and title, I think I would love this script, especially as an actress, I think the logline is almost there...almost almost...needs a bit of something...in the navigating bit, or in the end, what does she find, within or outside of herself maybe.

Marie Hatten

Wow that really resonates with me @Juliana tbh I thinks that’s one of the weak points in the script ( the ending for Emilia). Loglines are so hard , I’ll need to tweak it a little .

Rick Dumont

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Marie Hatten

Wow thanks Rick Dumont

Kevin Lenoble

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Marie Hatten

Thanks @Kevin Lenoble

Koby Nguyen

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Koby Nguyen

Physical violence scares me, I hope your young woman is doing well, I really liked the logline.

Marie Hatten

Thanks so much @Koby Nguyen

Anthony Garrone

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Marie Hatten

Thanks @Anthony

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