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OVERLORDE

OVERLORDE
By Brian Streaty

GENRE: Sci-fi, Drama
LOGLINE: A brilliant but troubled Egyptologist sparks an international incident when she invades the tomb of a mummified celestial being, only to become possessed by the entity's mysterious powers.

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OVERLORDE is a science fiction and adventure narrative that chronicles the journey of Deborah Brockton, a distinguished yet troubled Egyptologist. It is a high-concept four-quadrant story with grounded characters and broad appeal, blending elements of family drama, speculative fiction, sci-fi battles, and relatable characters. The story begins in ancient Egypt, where a mysterious spacecraft carrying the DIVOCs appears, signaling the potential end of humanity. Four thousand years later, Deborah, now a lecturer at a university in Egypt, is approached by Walter, who presents her with an ancient tablet that could change our understanding of history. Walter convinces Deborah to explore the depths of a pyramid in Cairo, where they discover the mummified being known as Athor. A seismic shift occurs, and Deborah becomes possessed by Athor, leading to events that force her to confront her past and her newfound powers. As Deborah and Athor struggle for control over her body, her estranged parents come to her. Walter, realizing the gravity of the situation, teams up with Deborah's parents to save her. Together, they navigate the dangers posed by the DIVOCs and work to prevent them from achieving their goal. In the climax, Deborah and her allies successfully prevent the DIVOCs from awakening other gods, thereby saving humanity. The resolution sees Deborah reconciling with her parents and planning to continue their mission to protect the world from future threats. Deborah discovers a mummified celestial being's tomb, which leads to her possession by the entity's enigmatic powers. This revelation uncovers her lineage as a descendant of the ancient Egyptian God, Athor, endowing her with extraordinary abilities. The plot intricately weaves Deborah's struggles, including her battle with alcoholism and the trauma of her brother's demise. As she grapples with these internal conflicts, she must also contend with Athor's possession, adding a layer of complexity to her character. Her journey is further complicated by the advanced alien race known as the DIVOCs, who have infiltrated human civilization to save their dying species. The DIVOCs seek the final resting place of Athor, their mortal adversary, and if successful, they will become an unstoppable force, leading to humanity's downfall. In her quest to thwart the DIVOCs, Deborah is joined by her estranged parents, Joey and Kelly. Together, they confront the alien threat while addressing their familial issues and past traumas. Initially motivated by personal gain, Walter Smirnoff becomes an unexpected ally to Deborah and her parents. Walter's character evolves as he recognizes the gravity of the situation and develops feelings for Deborah. The narrative explores friendship, family, and self-discovery themes while addressing love, loss, and grief. Action sequences are intense, featuring physical confrontations between Deborah and the DIVOCs and familial disputes. The story appeals to adventure and science fiction enthusiasts, drawing parallels to Indiana Jones, Tomb Raider, and Dune.

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