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In the year 2088, where air has become a taxed commodity, a desperate miner steals oxygen from the system to save his sister’s life—but he discovers that the “apocalypse” they have been imprisoned under in the Dome is the greatest lie the world has ever known.
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The surface of the Earth has been declared toxic. The remaining humanity lives inside “The Dome,” controlled by the Ethos Corporation. Every person wears a Bio-Sensor around their neck, charging them for every breath they take.
Aryan, an ordinary laborer, joins the rebels on a mission to uncover the truth about the Dome. He discovers that under Project Zero, the real environment is hidden behind an OLED Shield.
This is a story of poverty, corruption, and the fight for freedom.
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The urgency and personal stakes for the protagonist are very clear. I would also like to see one word about the protagonist's personality or flaw in the logline.
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