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SYNOPSIS:
During a luxurious sea voyage, a group of friends and family find themselves stranded on a mysterious island that few KTT know about — the Northern Sentinel. After a violent storm, their yacht breaks down. At first, the place seems heavenly: white sand, tropical forests, quiet lagoons. But they soon realize that they are not alone here. The island holds a dark secret. An ancient tribe that has never had contact with the outside world lives in the dense jungle. Their leader is the wise but cruel Bomani, who sees the aliens as a threat to his people. However, there is a girl among the tribe, Amina (the chief's niece), who is kind and curious, and decides to help Dylan, the young son of the family, save his loved ones. A bond arises between them that will be both a salvation and a curse. Each episode opens up new sides of the island, from the ancient rituals and secrets of the tribe to the moral dilemmas between "civilized" people and those who live in harmony with nature. Gradually, the characters begin to realize that the island is not just a place — it is a living force capable of influencing their minds, fears and memories. They struggle for survival, trust, and salvation, but the deeper they delve into the mystery of Sentinel, the more they realize that the true monster is not always what lives in the jungle.
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Wow!
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THE SENTINEL sounds interesting, Oleg Mullayanov! Your logline is really long. It's 67 words. I suggest keeping your logline to 35 words or less/around 35 words.
Stop the logline on "...outsiders...". It seems like a proper movie from the synopsis
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