Hi Talia, the synopsis is a little confusing. Who is she trying to save her from? Maybe you could expand on the idea a bit.

Thank you Wilmer Villanueva ! Perhaps this is more to your liking? :)

Thank you Michael Dzurak for your honest review.

Talia Frank the logline has much of what it needs but I'd rearrange it to sound snappier:

In an infernal dystopia, a teenager pursued by secret police must decide between saving her sister, herself, or humanity.