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THE BUSINESS BOYS

THE BUSINESS BOYS
By Ilham Von Schöning

GENRE: Family
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 A burned-out father and a bold, chaotic creative become unlikely business partners—and even more unlikely friends—as their lives spiral through drag shows, family drama, and design emergencies in a quest to rediscover who they really are. 

SYNOPSIS:

THE BUSINESS BOYS is a heartfelt, stylish comedy-drama about identity, reinvention, and emotional truth. When Dave, a struggling interior designer and father, crosses paths with Steve, a sharp-tongued heir to a furniture empire, the two are thrown into a whirlwind of queer nightlife, family reckonings, and professional chaos.

As their lives entangle and their facades crack, both men are forced to face what they’ve been avoiding—who they really are, and who they want to become. Set in New York City, the film celebrates chosen family, midlife reinvention, and the messy beauty of being seen.

THE BUSINESS BOYS

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Ilham Von Schöning

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Ilham Von Schöning

Hilarious, warm, and al lot of LOVE

Maurice Vaughan

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Ilham Von Schöning

thanks a lot :-)

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, @Ilham.

Ilham Von Schöning

Hey Maurice, do you know if there is a chance to pitch my Script for free, or to be able to get in touch with some producers???

Marcos Fizzotti

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Maurice Vaughan

Something I do to pitch for free is post a page from my script in Stage 32's Your Stage Lounge, Ilham Von Schöning, like First Page Friday.

The links I commented on your introduction post a few days ago could help you connect with producers (www.stage32.com/lounge/screenwriting/BusinessBoys).

Rutger Oosterhoff

I would not pitch yet, Miss Von Schöning . Reading your script, you still have some problems with formatting your sluglines, and the action line that should be placed beneath it, not being part of it. I would buy "The Hollywood Standard" for those formatting issues, and others. Best, Rutger

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Rutger Oosterhoff

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Ilham Von Schöning

thank you Rutger

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