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A burned-out father and a bold, chaotic creative become unlikely business partners—and even more unlikely friends—as their lives spiral through drag shows, family drama, and design emergencies in a quest to rediscover who they really are.
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THE BUSINESS BOYS is a heartfelt, stylish comedy-drama about identity, reinvention, and emotional truth. When Dave, a struggling interior designer and father, crosses paths with Steve, a sharp-tongued heir to a furniture empire, the two are thrown into a whirlwind of queer nightlife, family reckonings, and professional chaos.
As their lives entangle and their facades crack, both men are forced to face what they’ve been avoiding—who they really are, and who they want to become. Set in New York City, the film celebrates chosen family, midlife reinvention, and the messy beauty of being seen.
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Hilarious, warm, and al lot of LOVE
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thanks a lot :-)
You're welcome, @Ilham.
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Hey Maurice, do you know if there is a chance to pitch my Script for free, or to be able to get in touch with some producers???
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Something I do to pitch for free is post a page from my script in Stage 32's Your Stage Lounge, Ilham Von Schöning, like First Page Friday.
The links I commented on your introduction post a few days ago could help you connect with producers (www.stage32.com/lounge/screenwriting/BusinessBoys).
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I would not pitch yet, Miss Von Schöning . Reading your script, you still have some problems with formatting your sluglines, and the action line that should be placed beneath it, not being part of it. I would buy "The Hollywood Standard" for those formatting issues, and others. Best, Rutger
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thank you Rutger
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