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Ethan Bennet is a brilliant but quiet teenager, studying at a prestigious scientific boarding school in England. Fascinated by time, he fills notebooks with spirals and equations, carrying within him a silent wound: the absence of a father, and a mother slowly fading into silence. One day, during a striking class, the enigmatic Professor Voss poses a question: “What if time is neither a line nor a loop, but a spiral around a void?” That moment plants a seed — the image of a cosmic clock where time coils like memory. Everything changes when Ethan meets Sarah, a luminous young artist. They connect under the stars by a quiet lake. She doesn’t try to solve him. She sees him. Through her, Ethan discovers another kind of truth — one made of tenderness and presence. But just as light enters his life, time strikes without mercy: his mother dies. Too late for a final word. Sitting beside her, he hears the ticking of the watch she gave him — a small sound, yet cosmic. He understands: at the center of his spiral, there isn’t a void… but a heart. From that loss emerges a revelation: the black hole is a father — collapsing inward. The white hole is a mother — giving birth to light. Time is not a line, but a force of attraction. A memory in motion. Surrounded by his loyal friends, his sister Maya, Sarah, and an aging man named Eduardo, Ethan begins to live again. He becomes a father. And as time accelerates, one truth endures: the invisible bonds that love weaves through generations.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback and star rating. It truly means a lot to me, especially as this is my first project.
Just so you know, I’ve now updated the project with the full professional PDF file, including all the polished visuals, scenes, and thematic notes. If you’re ever curious to take another look, it’s there now.
“A Journey Through the Heart of Time” is very close to me — a poetic exploration of grief, memory, and cosmic love. I’m really glad it resonated with you.
If you’re curious, I’ve also shared two other projects (“Jumelles” and “The Ship Bearing the Sun”) on my Stage 32 profile. I’d love for you to discover them as well.
Thanks again for your time and support.
Warm regards,
Koby
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Really good !
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Très rarement vue de trou blanc au cinéma, ça intrigue beaucoup mais ça promet aussi.
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I've always been fascinated by stories that involve time travel or the understanding of time travel. Your story has that fascination, along with black holes, which are another enigma of the universe, so I think you have a story that will undoubtedly leave anyone who sees it thinking and reflecting. Best of luck.
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Hello Wilmer Villanueva -
Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback and your rating. I’m truly happy that my project resonated with you. Your words encourage me to keep going and deepen my work.
Wishing you all the best on your own creative journey!