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SYNOPSIS:
When Sunny, a burned-out wellness influencer, finally gets her shot at leading a luxury yoga retreat in paradise, she’s convinced it’s her moment to step out from behind the screen and reclaim her purpose. But her dreams quickly turn into a nightmare when a wildly mismatched group of women — including a betrayed housewife, a stressed nurse, a corporate exec on the verge, a lonely dentist, and a terminally ill mother — show up looking for escape, not enlightenment. As tequila flows and secrets unravel, what begins as a glossy brand activation spirals into a week of hookups, breakdowns, confrontations, and laugh-out-loud moments of truth. The Yoga Retreat is a sharp, female-led ensemble comedy about reconnection, reinvention, and the messy, hilarious magic that happens when women stop pretending and start showing up.
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Hello Mallory:
I have a yoga background and love the vibe of this story.
Reach out to me if you like. I have some thoughts about adding clearer stakes and consequences to your logline and synopsis. I'd be happy to share them with you if you are interested.