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After a night of erotic roleplay shatters into silence, a dominant Persian woman and a cautious Arab barista must confront the wreckage of their trust — and when one shows up unannounced mid-renovation, apron still on, counting down like her heart depends on it, both are forced to choose: armor, or intimacy.
SYNOPSIS:
After a night of erotic roleplay spins into silence and regret, two women—Marla, dominant and emotionally untethered, and Carla, cautious but deeply stirred—find themselves broken apart by fear and pride. But when Carla shows up the next day mid-construction, apron still on, and starts counting down like her heart depends on it, the rules shift.
What follows is tender, raw, and brimming with restraint.
A whispered apology. A hand on the shoulder.
A line that lands like a lifeline: “Let me make us both feel not stupid anymore.”
YOU FUCKIN’ BITCH is a 12-page short about power, longing, and the terrifying intimacy of being seen.
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