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After ritual attacks shake a prestigious New England college, occult professor Noah Longfellow teams up with unlikely allies to stop an ancient evil—and confront the cursed legacy that binds him to the school’s haunted history.
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Fresh concept, Anthony Cloutier. Great job on the logline, but I have two suggestions:
Change "occult professor Noah Longfellow" to "a _______ (the main flaw he has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes his personality) occult professor*." Names in loglines are usually for biopics, well-known stories, and franchises (like Mission: Impossible), and an adjective will give the reader more insight into his character.
Tell what they're trying to stop the ancient evil from doing.
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