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A Warborn Orphan. A Dangerous Magic. A Prophecy Ignited - In a land torn apart by ancient sorcery, a young kitchen boy with scarred hands must embrace his deadly powers, survive monstrous assassins, and claim the destiny his enemies fear most-becoming the prophesied destroyer of their crown.
SYNOPSIS:
Title: Deathwish (Evelda)
Genre: YA Fantasy Adventure Series (for sale)
Similar projects: Shadow and Bone, The Witcher, LOTR, Harry Poter
Budget: Blockbuster
Synopsis:
He was raised to serve the crown. He was born to destroy it.
Twelve-year-old Ador scrubs blood from palace floors, eats scraps from gold platters, and bows to the ruthless tyrant who burned his homeland to ash. Scarred by fire. Branded by fate. He is nothing more than a servant... or so he believes.
Until the visions start....
And the monsters arrive.
Until he learns the truth—he is the living key to a prophecy whispered in secret and feared by the throne. A mysterious force called the Oko Banti (or ¨Death-Wish¨) nearly wiped his people from the world, but now that same power stirs in his blood.
As secrets begin to unravel, aided by a mystic with his own secrets, and hunted by a band of merciless mercenaries, Ador must decide: become the weapon his enemies forged—or embrace his power and become the flame that burns their empire down.
Potential: Series (TV, Web, Limited)
Market:
Primary Audience
Age: 13–24 (Gen Z) Why: Craves chosen-one stories, dark secrets, palace intrigue, and underdog heroes. Engaged on TikTok, Reddit, and fandom forums. Watch Habits: Fans of Shadow and Bone, Wednesday, The Witcher, Stranger Things. Love bingeable, high-stakes, emotional fantasy.
Secondary Audience
Age: 25–34 (Millennials) & 35–49 Why: Grew up on Harry Potter and LOTR. Drawn to mature, morally complex fantasy with strong character arcs and world building. Includes: Parents watching with teens, fantasy readers, gamers, cosplayers.
Additional Insights
Gender Split: ~55% female, 45% male
Global Appeal: Top markets: US, UK, Canada Rising fanbases: Brazil, India, Philippines, Eastern Europe Psychographics: Emotion-driven, lore-loving, fandom-ready audiences who love to obsess, ship, and speculate.
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I think you have a solid logline except the last part, Khari Telesford. I suggest saying what his destiny is.
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Appreciate it Maurice
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No problem, @Khari Telesford.
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