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A young man standing on the brink of life and death, in desperate attempts to commit suicide, encounters unexpected obstacles and an encounter that makes him think about the value of his own existence.
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Anton, a 29-year-old loser, is plunged into the abyss of depression: loans, job refusals, toxic relationships with his family. He plans to pass away, but every attempt (pills, a bath, a noose, jumping under a train) turns into a failure, accompanied by absurd and tragicomic visions. In moments of desperation on a dating site, he receives a message from Tanya, a woman whose smile hides her own scars. Their meeting in a cafe becomes a turning point: through black humor and honesty, they find a connection that both of them lacked so much. The ending leaves the question open, but for the first time in a long time, Anton notices snow outside the window — a symbol of fragile hope.
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Sounds like a unique Comedy Drama, Abdusamad Shafiev. I think your logline could be tightened up a little and "an encounter" is vague. I think it'll help if you told what the encounter is.
A suicidal young man encounters unexpected obstacles and __________ that make him think about the value of his own existence.