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WHEN EAGLES BURN
By John Stone
When The Throne Burns, Sinners Are Punished
SYNOPSIS:
Peter purchases an antique throne, exported from Mexico. However, his usually kind nature becomes distorted as he becomes possessed and recalculates his abused childhood at the hands of his stepfather. His Mother bears the brunt of his vicious tongue as she witnesses his metamorphosis, during a savage attack upon her.
WHEN EAGLES BURN
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This sounds interesting and spooky, John Stone. I suggest adding more details about the story to your logline. The inciting incident, the protagonist with an adjective (the main flaw the protagonist has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality), the story goal, and the stakes.
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Abdusamad, Thank you for your ratings. Much appreciated. Best.