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When The Throne Burns, Sinners Are Punished.
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Peter purchases an exported Mexican throne. However, his usually kind nature becomes distorted as he becomes possessed by the powers that resurface within the antiquity as he recalculates his abused childhood at the hands of his stepfather. It is his Mother that bears the brunt of his vicious tongue as she witnesses his conversion during a savage attack upon her.
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This sounds interesting and spooky, John Stone. I suggest adding more details about the story to your logline. The inciting incident, the protagonist with an adjective (the main flaw the protagonist has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality), the story goal, and the stakes.
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Abdusamad, Thank you for your ratings. Much appreciated. Best.
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