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PERFECT STRANGERS
By John Stone
Two complete strangers. A misplaced text - A flirtation b'twixt.
SYNOPSIS:
Filipino beauty Modi sits inside a train carriage on her way to London. She sends a message using a phone messaging service. Leonardo sits opposite her and plays an online game when he receives her misplaced message. An intriguing conversation between them develops until the end of the line.
PERFECT STRANGERS
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Thank you for your ratings guys, Really appreciated.
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Thanks Nate.
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Hey thanks again Tasha! HNY!
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Hey John Stone - would love more information in the logline. Here's a template that will perhaps help with the missing elements.
“After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (an adjective and the protagonist's position/role) tries to _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”