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A troubled ex-marine, subjected to illegal MK-Ultra mind control experiments, seeks revenge after falling victim to mail fraud.
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In "A Guy in a Bar," a woman discovers she is being stalked by a patron from a bar in a neighboring town. The stalker, an older ex-marine, is a victim of secret MK Ultra mind control experiments and a cruel catfishing (mail fraud) scheme orchestrated by her mother during the Vietnam War. As the past collides with the present, she must confront the chilling consequences of their intertwined histories and the dark secrets that threaten her life. - HORROR, SCIFI, THRILLER, MYSTERY
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Many people don't understand the term "catfishing." Can you find a short civilian explanation for the word instead? Otherwise, it's a great hook! (pun intended)
lol. I’ll see what I can replace it with
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Changed it to "mail fraud" since the term "catfishing" didn't exist since the World Wide Web also didn't exist back in the 70's. Thank you Debbie Seagle
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Quarter - Finalist - A Guy in a Bar - The 2025 PAGE Awards - https://pageawards.com/past-winners/2025-winners/2025-quarter-finalists/
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