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PACIFIC VALLEY
By Tucker Teague
Juliana and her fellow student film crew face mounting obstacles as their documentary project is caught up in a local labor strike and threatens to expose corruption that may rock the city of Pacific Valley for years to come.
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This has very political leanings, I'm sold!
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Amazing Tucker Teague
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I think you have a solid logline except "Juliana," Tucker Teague. Names in loglines are usually for biopics, well-known stories, and franchises (like Mission: Impossible). I suggest changing "Juliana" to "a _______ (the main flaw she has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes her personality) filmmaker." It'll give the reader insight into her character.
Great advice Maurice Vaughan. Thanks!