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After killing a police officer to save his wrongly accused son, decorated military veteran Kane is sentenced to life in prison. But when a ruthless serial killer begins targeting cops, gang members, and their families, Kane is secretly recruited by the government to track him down in exchange for a second chance at freedom. As the investigation unfolds, Kane discovers the murders are tied to a long-buried tragedy, a corrupt web of law enforcement secrets, and a revenge-fueled killer whose pain runs deeper than anyone imagined. With his own wife and son now in the killer’s crosshairs, Kane must wage one final war between justice and vengeance to save his family and reclaim his life.
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Love the story, but the logline needs to be 30 words or less Derrick Vernon How about this?
A retired veteran, trying to save his wrongly accused son, becomes incarcerated. Offered redemption, he hunts a serial killer targeting cops and gangs, while confronting personal demons and protecting his family.
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David Brown thanks.
Thanks for the feedback. How are you guys these days, I'm still trying to get my scripts read.
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