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RUINS TO REDEMPTION

RUINS TO REDEMPTION
By Derrick Vernon

GENRE: Thriller / Suspense, Action
LOGLINE: After killing to save his wrongly accused son, an imprisoned ex-cop is recruited to hunt a serial killer waging war on police and gangs, forcing him to confront his past.

SYNOPSIS:

After killing a police officer to save his wrongly accused son, decorated military veteran Kane is sentenced to life in prison. But when a ruthless serial killer begins targeting cops, gang members, and their families, Kane is secretly recruited by the government to track him down in exchange for a second chance at freedom. As the investigation unfolds, Kane discovers the murders are tied to a long-buried tragedy, a corrupt web of law enforcement secrets, and a revenge-fueled killer whose pain runs deeper than anyone imagined. With his own wife and son now in the killer’s crosshairs, Kane must wage one final war between justice and vengeance to save his family and reclaim his life.

RUINS TO REDEMPTION

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Tasha Lewis 2

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Mark Films

Love the story, but the logline needs to be 30 words or less Derrick Vernon How about this?

A retired veteran, trying to save his wrongly accused son, becomes incarcerated. Offered redemption, he hunts a serial killer targeting cops and gangs, while confronting personal demons and protecting his family.

David Leon Brown Jr

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Derrick Vernon

David Brown thanks.

Derrick Vernon

Thanks for the feedback. How are you guys these days, I'm still trying to get my scripts read.

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