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ISA - SCI-FI WRITING PROMPT PRACTICE SCRIPT (SEEKING FEEDBACK)
By Joe Gipps

GENRE: Science Fiction
LOGLINE:

When two scavengers break into a long abandoned research facility they unknowingly catch the eye of the chief of security, a vigilant but degraded AI who is still following its last directive: Enforce the ethical lockdown of the facility, by any means necessary.


P.S. This is my first attempt at writing a short 1 scene screenplay so any advice at all is greatly appreciated!

SYNOPSIS:

Del Arlen and Mara Voss are two scavengers looking for high-value tech hidden within the KRONOS Research Facility. However, when they make there way into the facility, would seem they are not the only ones there. I.S.A, the research facility's AI head of security has been watching for over twenty years, ready to enforce its main directive if the need arises.

As Del and Mara explore something seems off, finding traces of past events, they realise that they are not alone. I.S.A is watching, and it sees them as a threat to the facility's ethical directives.

ISA - SCI-FI WRITING PROMPT PRACTICE SCRIPT (SEEKING FEEDBACK)

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