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TERROR AT GITCHE GUMEE
By Rhonda & Bobby Aycock
A devastating terrorist attack shatters a pastor's faith and reveals a chasm between him and his estranged son, forcing them to embark on a harrowing journey of survival that will either heal their relationship or expose a long-buried secret that could destroy it forever.
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Rhonda & Bobby Aycock, The preacher as a protagonist offers a fresh angle, especially when paired with the inner conflict of repairing a strained father-son relationship. The phrase “mysterious, forgotten power” is intriguing, though it could be strengthened by hinting at its nature or origin: spiritual, ancestral, magical? A bit more specificity would help the hook land even harder.
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