Need help in getting two of my characters to shut up!!! | Bill Brock

Bill Brock

Need help in getting two of my characters to Shut Up!!!

A recent producer's note from my award-winning feature screenplay, JAMES DEAN: CROSSING THE FINISH LINE (2021 Santa Barbara International Screenplay Awards) included that I trim down the Jeanette / Jimmy scene. Uggghhhh! I've got to kill my darlings. What portions of the conversation need to go? Phone lines are open. I'm currently taking requests. Thank you. : )

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