Brother, i miss you "student film" | Melvin Lainez

This was my final project for the Film class I was taking.. My film professor did not like how to story was told, saying that it is confusing and I do get what she means. I could have done more shots from every scenes, but due to timing, it was not possible. I also realize that working with kids is not easy. P.S. Even though I know my mistakes, I would like if you, the person watching, to give me advises. It will help me improve on the way to shoot, edit, & direct, because I know myself, that I still have a lot to learn. POSITION IN THIS FILM: Directer, Editor, Screenwriter