Screenwriting : the Giant Killer Script Ch 2 Pg 11 review by Gregory Barone

(Please note that this is done as it would a script for a comic, I have a background in comics so I use comic terms for the script. I do hope to get this made as a movie of short tv show. I'm looking for feed back on the pages if you can take the time to read and leave a review in the comments.) 

Page 11 - Four Panels

(Ch2 Pg11 Panel-One)

EXT. SMALL FARMHOUSE - DAY. Garerit arrives at his family's modest farmhouse. The structure is old, with cracked walls and a sagging roof. There are signs of struggle- overgrown weeds in the garden, a broken fence. The window shutters hang crookedly. Garerit stands in the doorway, surveying the scene with a somber expression.

CAP: After the turmoil, the tailor finds his family just barely holding on.

SB (Garerit - Inner Thought): This place... it hasn't been easy for them.

(Ch2 Pg11 Panel-Two)

INT. FARMHOUSE - DAY. Garerit enters, his face filled with concern. Inside, his family looks haggard-his mother sits by the hearth, her face worn with worry, while his younger siblings sit nearby, looking hungry but relieved to see him. The room is sparse, with only a small fire burning and some scattered belongings.

SB (Garerit): (Softly) Mother... siblings...

SB (Mother): Gerarit! Thank god... you're safe!

SB (Garerit): (With a sad smile) I've brought food and supplies. It's not much, but it's enough to get us by.

(Ch2 Pg11 Panel-Three)

Garerit kneels down, unloading the sacks of goods and placing them on a small table. His younger sister reaches up eagerly, her eyes wide with relief. His brother watches from the corner, barely hiding his gratitude. Garerit looks at his family, a mixture of sadness and determination in his eyes.

SB (Garerit): This is from the giant's hoard. We'll make sure you have enough to get through this.

SB (Sister): (Smiling, excited) Food... real food!

SB (Brother): (Quietly, with gratitude) You did it, Garerit... you saved us.

(Ch2 Pg11 Panel-Four)

Garerit stands up, looking at his mother. She approaches him, eyes filled with both relief and sorrow. She reaches out to touch his shoulder, her expression a mix of pride and pain.

SB (Mother): Gerarit, we've been so hungry... and scared. I didn't know how much longer we could last.

SB (Gerarit): I know, Mother. It's all right now. I won't let anything happen to you.

SB (Mother): I have something to show you.

CAP: Despite the hardship, Gerarit's family is now safe. But the road ahead is still uncertain.