Screenwriting : What's the hardest scene to write in a screenplay? by Joshua Powell

Joshua Powell

What's the hardest scene to write in a screenplay?

Some scenes seem simple until you actually sit down to write them.

For me, it's often scenes where the audience needs to feel a character's internal conflict without simply having them explain what they're feeling.

What's the hardest type of scene for you to write?

Examples might include:

• The first ten pages

• Romantic scenes

• Comedy

• Action

• Confrontations

• Endings

• Emotional goodbyes

• Exposition

More importantly, how do you overcome it?

Pat Alexander

The hardest type of scene to write is almost universally exposition disguised as natural conflict (like delivering backstory while diffusing a ticking bomb). It requires balancing necessary plot mechanics with engaging drama so the audience doesn't realize they are receiving an information dump. These scenes always take me a few drafts to get right, but I start by writing the worst, most obvious version of the scene and it's always too long. Then draft by draft I'm usually able to improve and get to the sharpest core message eventually

Maurice Vaughan

Sometimes it's the scene where characters just talk, Joshua Powell. Exposition scenes too. I like to add things that make the dialogue more interesting.

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

I definitely struggle with the first ten pages ^^; don't want to go so slowly that people tune out but also don't want to go so fast I practically give the game away...

David Taylor

The one which you know nothing about because you haven’t done the research yet so can’t write it.

Joshua Powell

Pat Alexander I like that approach. Writing the obvious version first takes the pressure off, then each draft becomes about finding what the scene is really trying to say.

Joshua Powell

Maurice Vaughan I agree. If characters are just talking, I try to make the environment or their actions carry part of the conversation so the dialogue isn't doing all the work.

Joshua Powell

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh That's a tough balance. I've found it's better to leave readers wanting one more answer than giving them ten too early.

Joshua Powell

David Taylor That's a great point. Research gives you confidence, and that confidence usually shows up on the page.

Banafsheh Esmailzadeh

It really is, Joshua Powell. I naturally want to go slowly but I also have no trouble just diving right in, it depends on the story. I’ve been criticised for both lol

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