November Write Club Challenge : The Fallen Angel: Starlight and Broken Wings by Harish Chidambaram Alias Harish Arjunaa

Harish Chidambaram Alias Harish Arjunaa

The Fallen Angel: Starlight and Broken Wings

Raziel is casted out of the angelic realm of Bhuwar Lokha for no fault of his, Bhuwar lokha is a plain of existence mentioned in the ancient text of Taitraiya Upanishads and many other where Adam and Eve said to have originally lived. It is a circular plain, superimposed on the physical realm like a first floor of earth. Zaphkiel an Angel who originally committed the sin, has flipped all evidence on Raziel. Raziel falls on earth naked in an alley. Neither his powers nor his body or his wings are affected. The word broken wings in the tittle is a metaphorical representation of stripping off his freedom in the angelic realm. He watches people walking fully clothed and covered and decides to get some clothing nearby to cover himself, he hides his wings in it, He walks to the main city and see the movie poster of an Angel played by Seraphina Vance the Hollywood Superstar and the sex symbol of hollywood also the youth icon of ageless beauty. He instantly falls in love with her, He assumes she can understand him better and want to connect with her. A woman with cynical sarcasm Chloe notices him lost and decides to help him. But Seraphina is already married and has wonderful family life. why would she even care?  How it is all suppose to unfold? Raziel meditates regularly and it reaches a point he gains meditative powers and oneness. This is because Earth is Karma Bhumi in ancient text, meaning the place where one grows and out grows everything. The place where you create situations to rise or perish. So he gets that spiritual connect easier already holding a higher realm benefits. How Raziel meets Seraphina How the one sided attempt of Raziel reaches a turning point, How does Seraphina who is inquisitive but not sincere turns her head to Raziel? How Raziel's wisdom turns head at the same time gaslit by Chloe's cynical sarcasm? How did Seraphina begin to see the reckoning, the Mesiah aspect of Raziel, Where Chloe's synical sarcasm reaches a turning point. What will happen to Seraphina's husband Marcus Vance? Will seraphina introspect a 360 degree turn of her life due to Raziel's wisdom?

Charlene Brian

Interesting concept, Harish. I like the blend of mythology, spirituality, and modern-day drama. Raziel's journey from exile to self-discovery has the potential to create a compelling character arc. Wishing you all the best as you continue developing the story!

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