Hi, Yvette Huntley. I think the logline needs work. How about this: "After a multi-personality, bi-racial woman finds out her Mr. Right has a double life and a future bride-to-be, she uses a fake persona to befriend his fiancé and ignite a fairytale of sabotage and revenge."

But even with that logline, I don't know what "ignite a fairytale of sabotage and revenge" means. Maybe put something like "sabotage their wedding" instead of "ignite a fairytale of sabotage and revenge."

Thanks for the feedback

You're welcome, Yvette Huntley.