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ZOE'S WORD

ZOE'S WORD
By Levi Feeni

GENRE: Sci-fi, Drama
LOGLINE:

A father’s secret gamble grants his autistic daughter speech and newfound
abilities, until the truth surfaces, shattering his marriage and forcing the
family to choose between heartbreak or hope.

SYNOPSIS:

Maya and Jordan Johnson are an overburdened couple struggling to care for their fifteen-year-old daughter, Zoe, who is on the autism spectrum and nonverbal. Financial pressures, mounting exhaustion, and conflicting opinions about Zoe’s future place an enormous strain on their marriage. Desperate for a solution, Jordan secretly contacts Dr. Kent, a neuroscientist conducting an experimental procedure involving a microchip that could potentially grant Zoe improved cognitive and speech capabilities.

Without Maya’s knowledge, Jordan consents to implant the chip. To his amazement and eventually Maya’s and Zoe experiences bring forth a dramatic breakthrough: she speaks, interacts socially, and bonds like never before, especially with her younger brother, Malcolm. Believing it a miraculous event, Maya is unaware of Jordan’s deception. The family revels in Zoe’s sudden transformation, highlighted by a lavish “Sweet 17” celebration where Zoe dazzles everyone, reinforcing Maya’s belief in a divine miracle.

However, rumors surface that Zoe’s progress is the result of an experimental chip. A devastated Maya learns of Jordan’s betrayal, and their marriage teeters on the edge. Soon after, Zoe suffers severe seizures caused by the device overloading her brain, forcing Dr. Kent to remove it prematurely. The surgery is successful, but Zoe loses her newly acquired abilities and reverts to her former nonverbal state, leaving the family anguished.

In the aftermath, Maya contemplates divorce, feeling both betrayed and heartbroken. Yet, with heartfelt reminders that everyone acted out of love, Maya and Jordan reconcile, united by their devotion to Zoe. Over time, small signs of Zoe’s natural progress.

A year later, Dr. Kent returns with groundbreaking research showing that Zoe’s brain has been “reset,” allowing gradual development without the chip. He also reveals a newly refined, long-term device with fewer risks, offering renewed hope.

In a moment of forgiveness and solidarity, Maya and Jordan agree to consider the safer implant, reaffirming their commitment to Zoe’s future and each other, knowing that even in their darkest moments, the family’s love endures.

ZOE'S WORD

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Levi Feeni

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