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OLIVIA'S SECOND FIRST KISS
By Bill Taylor
Olivia’s plan: go to camp, get a swoony kiss, feel like a main character. Reality: chaos, crushes, and a boy who is the human embodiment of her ick list.
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Unique Family Comedy, Bill Taylor. And catchy title. I suggest explaining the last part of your logline some more. It's vague right now. And I suggest adding the stakes if you can work it into the logline.
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