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When a bookish thirteen-year-old learns her first kiss was accidentally wasted on the neighborhood goofball, she sets out to rewrite history with a swoony summer camp romance, only to find out that the real story might be messier, weirder and way better than anything in her favorite novel.
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Unique Family Comedy, Bill Taylor. And catchy title. I suggest explaining the last part of your logline some more. It's vague right now. And I suggest adding the stakes if you can work it into the logline.
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