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A HOMER’S NIGHTMARE
By Eric Boles

GENRE: Horror, Comedy
LOGLINE: When a hardware store's mascot goes on a murder spree, an employee and his lackluster friends must solve the case before the killer gets to them first.
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Eric Boles, this logline is fun, fast, and sets the tone right away. The stakes are clear and the premise is offbeat in the best way. To take it a step further, you might consider adding a touch of detail about the mascot itself (e.g., is it a person in costume, an animatronic, something else?) or what makes the employee and his friends uniquely ill-equipped or hilarious as protagonists. A little more specificity could heighten both the humor and suspense.

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