GENRE: Horror, Comedy
LOGLINE:
When a hardware store's mascot goes on a murder spree, an employee and his lackluster friends must solve the case before the killer gets to them first.
Eric Boles, this logline is fun, fast, and sets the tone right away. The stakes are clear and the premise is offbeat in the best way. To take it a step further, you might consider adding a touch of detail about the mascot itself (e.g., is it a person in costume, an animatronic, something else?) or what makes the employee and his friends uniquely ill-equipped or hilarious as protagonists. A little more specificity could heighten both the humor and suspense.
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Eric Boles, this logline is fun, fast, and sets the tone right away. The stakes are clear and the premise is offbeat in the best way. To take it a step further, you might consider adding a touch of detail about the mascot itself (e.g., is it a person in costume, an animatronic, something else?) or what makes the employee and his friends uniquely ill-equipped or hilarious as protagonists. A little more specificity could heighten both the humor and suspense.