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PHILOMENAS ITALY
By Anastasia Brown
How can a single girl leave her hometown to a Verona that breathes similar air to her America. Is it fair? Philomena leaves a conservative, Yankee Pennsylvania for an impassioned, rose-coloured European city.
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Hi Anastasia, this sounds like a great story, and your writing is very visual. However, loglines should be at most 2 sentences - most people try to stick to around 25 words. Shortening this up will show people that it's a really special story.
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