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CHARTWELL HOUSE
By Tracy David Sim
Hauntings at a heritage house in Portland, Oregon, force the home’s broken male occupant to act. In a genre twist, the entity of a once benevolent historical businesswoman and investigator forces the man to confront his demons, save his broken family, and turn his path of self-destruction into something meaningful.
CHARTWELL HOUSE
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Hi Tracy. I live in New West. I can't believe all the scripts you've written. Good for you! I'm up to my ears in a course at ScreenwritingU. I'll try to get back to you when it's over. Stay safe.
Hi Joan. I live in Coquitlam. I got both your notes and I am on here a lot. Still given'er, yes ;) I am motivated to start another. I get being up to your ears. When I'm draft writing, I rarely take breaks. No hurry, enjoy the course. I'll be around. Cheers :)
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I just uploaded the screenplay for comment and review (without title page). It hasn't been read by anyone. Good luck to eveyone!
It is always good to begin with a problem. Being rattled is not much of a problem. The problem seems to be that he has ‘demons’ and a broken family. The ghosts help him fix these problems. The logline should give some indication as to how.