THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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ALGORITHM
By Colin Carroll
After Megan downs a bottle of meds with a glass of wine she's forced to enter technology rehab and discovers the world has more to offer than just the things pushed to her on her phone.
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Two suggestions, Colin Carroll:
Change "Megan" to "_______ (the protagonist with an adjective)."
Add a comma after "wine."
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