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WILDWATER
By Will Amato
After an eager beaver college grad takes a job as a whitewater guide in the smokey mountains, he learns to relinquish the expectations of his father and let the good times roll with a nutty bunch of drifters and hillbillies.
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This sounds like it's gonna be fun to watch, Will Amato. Is this a feature or show?
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HI Maurice! This is a 1/2 hour pilot I'm getting ready to pitch. Based on some crazy lived experience.
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Oh wow. It's based on your life experiences, Will Amato. That's pretty cool.
I think the logline needs just a little work. Here's a logline suggestion: "After an eager college graduate takes a job as a whitewater guide in a small southern town, he learns to relinquish the expectations of his rich father and let the good times roll with a low-down dirty bunch of beatniks, drifters, and hillbillies."
Thanks Maurice! I love this edit. Thanks for your help :)