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MILITARY CUPID
By Will Amato
A couch potato must lose 60 lbs in 12 weeks before his super sexy militarycupid.com girlfriend returns from the war and realizes she’s been catfished.
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This sounds like it's going to be hilarious, Will Amato! I think you need to add an inciting incident to the logline: "After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a couch potato tries to lose 60 lbs in 12 weeks..."
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