Øyvind Aanderaa, Sounds like Jurassic Park meets Running Man/Hunger Games meets And Then There Were None. Maybe a reorganization of the words? It's difficult, because you're packing a lot of information in there. Does this work at all? "When a group of fame-seeking contestants arrive on an isolated island to film a failing reality show, they must set their petty grievances aside as they start to get killed one by one during a hurricane." If not, consider removing something that isn't completely relevant to the overall story. Example, is it absolutely necessary to mention the hurricane in the logline? The main story is that people are disappearing one by one on an isolated island while filming a reality show. Maybe it would help removing it? I dunno! Good luck. :)

Derek C. Block Ah yes I see your point, thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it :)